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Picture taken by my friend Cyndi Leos....thank you Cyndi.

Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Magpie #61 Celebrating Us...

Motivational Photography
prompt by Tess Kincaid
Challenge by Magpie Tales


momentous                     memories
celebrated
you, me, this sweet, wine, nectar
lulling my mind, igniting my body
producing this infatuation with your
lips, so full, created for pleasurous
kissing, captivating me with the
warmth of your
bear
paws
 upon
my
face
oh
forever love

~dkb~

14 comments:

indiwriter said...

very heady.. poem in a wineglass.. you seem to know your wine too :)

jbchicoine said...

I see what you did there! I love the shape of your beautiful words... :)

earlybird said...

Very clever! I love it. 'pleasurous kissing' just rolls off the tongue! and 'bear paws' - good writing.

Helen said...

I do enjoy the creative effort you put into your Magpie poems ... thanks for leaving me a comment - no, I'm not waiting for biopsy results now ~ though I have many times for pesky skin cancers. Always a little terrifying, more than a few positive results and surgery to fix me up.

versebender said...

This was very creative in form and substance. I liked the playful nature..."bear paws" for example. Spoke to me of enduring tenderness. Well done. Vb

Glenn Buttkus said...

Wonderful in its simplicity
and warm in its sentiment;
this is a lovely paean to still
being in love with your spouse,
and the intervention of alcohol
as catalyst for affection.
Fine job.

Steve Isaak said...

Clever use of structure, good piece.

haze said...

oh forever love...

so beautiful.

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

Thanks for visiting my blog today and commenting. Your poem is lovely.

I noted you live in Henderson, NV. I lived in Vegas for a few years (attended UNLV briefly, met my hubby there) back in the early '80s. It has changed a lot since then. But some of my most wonderful life memories happened in Vegas. :)

That corgi :) said...

I loved how you set this up like a champagne glass, Donna. And I loved this tribute that I'm thinking you wrote for your husband! So very nice!!

betty

Wanda..... said...

Your poem paints a tender moment...even with bear paws!

Isabel Doyle said...

very clever wine glass in a poem

Trellissimo said...

I like the beautiful shape of this poem.

Morning said...

perfectly fine tuned magpie.
well done.