Picture taken by my friend Cyndi Leos....thank you Cyndi.

Monday, October 29, 2012

Magpie #141:Memories....

Photo prompt Tess Kincaid
Writing challenge Magpie Tales

locked within my soul
rainy days
with you
walking obliviously...
 drenched clothes
clinging to our bodies
like magnets
lingering kisses
more sensuous
shared with nature
 you and me
time stretched ahead
for us
not knowing
these memories
and more
freeze frame
in my mind
each rain
as you shower
me with your love
each rain
without you...


jabblog said...

You've captured the sensuality and the romance of this photo. Such memories are sweet and sometimes bittersweet.

Tess Kincaid said...

Oh so very sad...

Carrie Burtt said...

A beautiful and wistful write...I can feel the loss and tender feelings of romance in this lovely poem!

Helen said...

When I saw Tess' prompt I immediately remembered one of the most passionate kisses I ever shared ... under a tree in a torrential downpour. Love your poem.

kaykuala said...

How sweet and how touching Donna! I wouldn't want to trade anything else whatsoever for wonderful memories with someone dear. One remains young!


De said...

Love this phrasing, especially:
like magnets"


Hedgi said...

Oh, wow, that was BEAUTIFUL.

Sue said...

I like the idea of kisses being better when shared with nature...


Sue said...

Those memories can be pretty powerful...


Kerin said...

Thanks so much for sharing...


Helena said...

Swept along beautifully there. So much more than just a kiss.

Kutamun said...

Parting is such sweet sorrow......

LindyLouMac in Italy said...

What beautiful poetry.

Bee's Blog said...

Thankfully no one can take away the memories which you have so beautifully brought to life.