Objects to be Destroyed by Man Ray
Poetry challenge by Magpie Tales
Photo presented by Tess Kincaid
time
the rushing forward
of it
eyes hypnotized to
the metronome
of it
the metronome
of it
suspended
incapable of action...
obsessed in observation
keeping track
close those eyes
feel the rhythm of life
leap into
the passage of time
leap into
the passage of time
and live it each day
~dkb~
10 comments:
Nice take on this photo!
Sounds like a good plan, Donna! Closing eyes, feeling... :-)
Nice message. Don't just watch life go by, join in!
like where you went with this...thanks for sharing your words
Yes for sure... well written.
It is easy to become hypnotized with the back and forth of life...well done...
Something transcendent about this ;smashed, Kronos !
Oh I remember my grandparents used to have one of those, always loved playing with it!
Feeling the rhythm of life is sound advice. Your poem is wonderful. Sometimes I have realized that I have become more of an observer and have had to shake myself back into real life.
Great poem.
Learning how to enjoy each and every day.
I hope that you are having a warm and bright Christmas season.
{{hugs}}
K.
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