tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211623838666231630.post426221782037132769..comments2023-09-09T05:55:45.871-07:00Comments on Discovering The Purpose of Our Lives...: Magpie #144: Squall of Memories...Donna B.http://www.blogger.com/profile/07015770616281528620noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211623838666231630.post-44223351085380398892012-11-27T07:27:57.555-08:002012-11-27T07:27:57.555-08:00I got a bit confused at first, too. Upon second re...I got a bit confused at first, too. Upon second reading, all came clear.<br /><br />Your story is sad and compelling...and, I think, plausible.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211623838666231630.post-25241716751774649302012-11-25T11:58:23.282-08:002012-11-25T11:58:23.282-08:00I may need to clarify my poem as I meant for it to...I may need to clarify my poem as I meant for it to be brother and sister....the sister took after their father, who was also a sea Captain, and had also been taken by the sea. The brother never had a stomach for a life at sea, so in his guilt, he lived in a lighthouse to protect those who were brave enough to sail the sea and honor his sister and father.Donna B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07015770616281528620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7211623838666231630.post-91659372163662444262012-11-24T03:24:58.679-08:002012-11-24T03:24:58.679-08:00The "he" and "she" sound like ...The "he" and "she" sound like a couple, but then he ended up living in the lighthouse? Interesting imagery, Donna, after having seen "The Life of Pi" yesterday, I could sure see those crashing waves. :-)DJanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07152183871573797791noreply@blogger.com